it isn’t easy
climbing the mountain at night
you have the cold
and the darkness
that bites right through
not to mention the
weight of everything
you carry up to
the summit, the peak,
the tippy top, but at the top
you can see for miles
and miles
and miles
if it isn’t cloudy
and if it is cloudy
well then there’s probably snow
and if there’s snow well then that can’t be a bad thing now can it
Such an optimistic poem!
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I love this. I also love that you have no capitals or punctuation because, frankly, that is very hard for me to do. I might try it tomorrow.
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Love the view from the mountain top. It totally makes it worth it! Nice structure!
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Love this so much — I haven’t been back to the mountains in so long!
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